Comment on the effectiveness of the product/proposal in relation to the original brief?
Strength
Its appropriate for the product/brief.
Suggestions
Purdey's - Design is busy but it may benefit from making the lines smoother & more defined (like the type on wedding invitations)
Comment on the appropriateness of the response to the identified audience and/or context?
Strength
Greetings Cards - aesthetic are very appropriate.
Suggestions
In general try branching out with different styles everything looks very simular (very nice!) but maybe try to experiment more & push yourself.
Notes
Wedding Invitation - Invite you to witness the next chapter in our love story. Should "be" their love story or as "we" become for the tense not to change.
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