I showed them all my work I had done. Why I had changed my colour and the reasons I have have done the products etc... And how I have added the brief 100 into it.
Although, I didn't think I got valuable feedback as they just said that the illustrations worked very well and this was a strength. My areas to improved was that it maybe too aimed at girls although, I talked about that issue and told them about how I had changed it to purple but wasn't as strong as the pink.
Also they said that Mary Jane Candies where too girly, even though I couldn't change that because that is nothing to do with what I have chosen it to do with what has been around for 100 years.
They told me to look to do it for other sweets and also consider more boys sweets but they obviously don't understand that there is not many sweets that have been invented in that year and that's the concept behind that design.
I think that only reason why they commneted on the Mary Jane Sweets is because they thought the design was girly and because of the name they have made a connection but that is just coincidence rather than what I have chosen so I can't develop upon that so therefore I am not going to action upon this feedback.
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